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Poem #1

May 13, 2008

Heres a poem that i wrote for my school project and thers only been two that ive really like. They r bout how i really felt around this guy. Heres one of them (P.S they dont have titles lol)

When im around you My stomach is in huge knots When you come near me

When you're standing there I turn red and start to sweat Not to sure why though

I think I like you Im not totally sure though Do you feel the same?

I see you smile, When you are looking at me Will you talk to me?

When you look my way I drift away in your eyes Your sweet hazel eyes

I have to admit I think I'm falling for you Do you like me too?

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    • Photo of JeanieAnn JeanieAnn
      JeanieAnn
      Female, 42
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      Housesitting....sigh. Miss you all!
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      Posted 2 months ago by JeanieAnn

      That's really sweet...I like that line too that Koko referenced below.

    • Photo of koko koko
      koko
      Female, 15
      doha, QA
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      never believe you'r eyes
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      Posted 2 months ago by koko

      (( When you look my way I drift away in your eyes Your sweet hazel eyes )) great pome keep going your job hon ;-)

    • Photo of Mindfreakwitch Mindfreakwitch
      Mindfreakwitch
      Female, 28
      Kaiserslautern, DE
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      A mad Poet with lots of Love for her Angel !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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      Posted 2 months ago by Mindfreakwitch

      I think its a really sweet poem, i like it.